Research graduation , its about ozone study

This is really important paper for my research graduation , its about ozone study I’m kinda done with this paper but my professor gave me few comment to change i will attach what did he wrote for me on my paper when i went to him i need to change to the better please : its four points see the attach file , also i have two figures about the ozone in different stations with different time i need you to write one page for each of them , also i attached my essay he wants me to put the figures organized for each paragraph he needs this paper to look good as a research graduation as well for the four points : intro , results , summary and references , For references and for good example use the example paper two its for one of the student and really good example also i need to to end it with good introduction you can use the references for the example i need more references , I will attach few slides for the study ozone and the site that he knows about what for my research i should do the 17 june and 18 june . please make sure the writer has atmospheric science major or meteorology or he is really expert how to read figures and see where is the highest ozone and lowest ….etc