My subject is BSc Management with Marketing

There are feedback comments throughout the dissertation proposal that I need to have addressed. They are content and writing items. The comments that are crossed out, I have addressed. There are some comments that state, “PAULA: I will address.” I am working on those; therefore, I do not need help with those comments. The grading rubric is included for each section, with which I need addressed accordingly. I’ve made some changes, but need a review. You should not need to add new sources, but if you do, they must be less than five years old.