Examine Correlations between terrorism risk and premiums in travel insurance

Firstly, can you perfect my English by editing the grammar, spelling and presentation of sentences. Secondly, under my result section, can you look through the excel I have uploaded and correct my analysis under correlations, p-value and t-statistic if they are wrong; which I used excel data analysis tools to calculate. I have uploaded a document with 6500 words and will upload the other 500 words by the end of tomorrow. Please contact me through my phone anytime.