HOW OUT-OF-CLASS LANGUAGE ACTIVITIES ARE INFLUENCING SAUDI STUDENTS TO LEARN EF?

I have a thesis proposal needs an editing.
I’ll upload the file with comments needed to be edited and a document contains general comments about the direction of this proposal to make it more scholarly and academic.
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Added on 06.05.2016 11:09
this work needs some adding and researching and organizing.
I want it ready for submission. here are the documents and comments that need to be edited and added.
thank you
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Added on 06.05.2016 11:12
please use this thesis as a guide.
Specially in the methodology parts like (Survey, Interviews, and Participant Observation)

I couldn\”t upload the file because of the size. but here is the thesis title:
(EFL Learning through Language Activities outside the Classroom: A Case Study of English Education Students in Thailand)
by: Ruedeerath Chusanachoti