Discuss Political Preference and the Correlation between Individual Views on Animal Welfare

Thesis paper editing (30 pages) + 1 page writing.
– read over the paper and see if anything else may need to be added to make the paper make more sense;
– no need to re-write it. Just edit everything into APA format, including the formatting the references, the first quotes in the paper and citations within the paper;
– WRITE ADDITIONAL 1 page on info from the studies required by the professor and the rest of the comments throughout the paper done to her specifications. The studies that need to be added are on page 19 (see pic attached). \”The studies are referenced through the paper, but the professor wants them all summarized in that section. I already summarized the Jerolmak study, so the additional studies need to be added below that one\”;
– if there is anything additional to add that you think would help the paper make sense and flow better – please add;
– Professor said she wanted all of the ones she suggested, if at all possible. They should all be online. Take all these studies and summarize the study and the results, within the paper. This is what she was searching for.
– There are also places within the paper that you have cited direct quotes and they are not correctly represented and cited within the references, I.e. Direct quote…(Gamin, 2006) for example. This needs to be looked at, as well.
– one of the studies I referenced in the paper (Humane Voters Study Results) that my professor had asked for additional information, within her comments – attached
– more data for your project attached (HSUS Politics Survey – HRC Memo and HSUS Constituent Politics – Final Results)
– anywhere in the paper that it states that the survey will be done on Facebook, it should just say via an online survey site, since I have yet to decide who I will be running it throughATTENTION: ask questions if necessary to ensure your changes reflect the purpose of the research paper.MORE clarifications: The purpose of the research paper is to see if there was a direct link between ones political affiliation and their view(s) towards animal welfare issues. I want to hopefully prove that \”yes\” that is the case, and gender, race, etc. may play a role, in addition to political preference. My hope from my upcoming research is that there is a clear definition between results. I am trying to show that while there were similar studies done, they don\’t clearly prove my conclusion and therefore my research is necessary. I have the questions that I will be pushing out in my upcoming survey. Let me know if they will be helpful to have.
As far as the pages added, Look at the study that i referenced already under the lit review section. That may need to be adjusted to match the other four we are adding. As long as the study is explained and the findings are explained then 2 pages should suffice. I am happy with adding length to the paper if need be. There are no maximum length concerns only it should be no less than 30.
When I discuss political preference that includes democrats, republicans, conservatives, those without a preference, etc. all of these \”subjects\” will be sought to participate within the survey to get a broad perspective of the results. I hope this all makes sense.