I got my instructor\'s feedback and she said \" Your thesis statement may not directly relate to the essay-you spend a lot of time on Mansanto. I think this analysis should balance with the point of your essay which is to argue for correct labeling and why this is important?

June 1, 2016

I got my instructor\’s feedback and she said \” Your thesis statement may not directly relate to the essay–you spend a lot of time on Mansanto. I think this analysis should balance with the point of your essay which is to argue for correct labeling and why this is important?

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Hello,

I got my instructor\’s feedback and she said \” Your thesis statement may not directly relate to the essay–you spend a lot of time on Mansanto. I think this analysis should balance with the point of your essay which is to argue for correct labeling and why this is important–you can make this connection by reinforcing claims, support, and analysis with direct connections back to your thesis in each body paragraph.\” I need help with my rough draft.

Final Research Paper will be assessed on the following components:

Structure
Development
Style
Grammar
APA formatting
Resources
Written a paper that is approximately seven to ten pages total in length, including

a title page
five to seven pages of body text (1,500 to 2,000 words)
a references page
Instruction files

ocampo_w3.doc..docx(20,27 KiB)